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Minor characters. It’s so hard for me to leave them minor. I want to know what drives them, why they do things, what broke them, and what good is left in them if they’re bad, what evil they can be pushed to if they’re good. They fascinate me. This is problematic. (But also good). Problematic because I [...] I’m reading through the feedback I’ve received, so that I can try put my brain in order before I tackle the rewrite of hob. A couple of things keep coming up: Calissa. A few people have suggested either cutting her or beefing her part up, because at the moment I lose her in the middle. Others find [...] *collapses* We have a draft two, and a whole new ending for hob an lam. I wanted to end it in fire, the way it started, but ultimately, something else kept cropping up, and in a way it fit in far better with the theme of the book. What’s that you say? Er, well…sometimes when I read [...] |
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